Assessment feedback Sheet

I have recieved an assessment feedback sheet which was given to me after I had submitted the original completed version of my magazine. The sheet gives me a "medal - what has been done well" and a "mission - what can be improved". From this I have learnt that to much space is being used because of the size of the text, especially for my feature article, generally magazine font size is 10 or 12pt. Also, in the media industry money is wasted when there is white spaces on the page, these would often be filled up with advertisments so I should check the amount of space being used and edit my magazine accordingly to utilise the empty space; in the contents listing I could add more listings, however I have worked out the correct number of pages and allocated the advertisments inbetween the articles, so to overcome this I could add some of the advertisments to the contents, ones which should entice the reader such as gig or tour dates. In the feature article space could be optismed by making the text smaller and seperating the text into columns, as it would appear in a published magazine. Overall, my magazine presents a good idea with a catchy name.